One of my favorite writing examples. Every writer has their own tone. Read aloud to hear your rhythm. //This Sentence Has Five Words: A Lesson from Gary Provost on Varying Sentence Length//Writing tips//Advice//Editing//Style//
Change Passive Voice to Active Voice. writing sentences in passive voice is discouraged b/c it can obscure the subject of the sentence & confuse the reader. It also usually creates a wordy and awkward sentence construction.
The 6 major narrator types - infographic - My personal preference in writing is a variation on the limited third person: keeping the focus on one narrating character at a time.but having multiple narrators between scenes/chapters/etc.